Talk:Aliens Everywhere

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I must object to the line about the [[Paramount Queen]] of -7 [[EC]].  In that article, she is clearly said to have been Xuriental.  It was her being covered in [[User:MorbusIff|brown fluid]] that so shocked Ghyllian public opinion.  --[[User:Jcowan|John Cowan]] 14:31, 17 May 2005 (EDT)
 
I must object to the line about the [[Paramount Queen]] of -7 [[EC]].  In that article, she is clearly said to have been Xuriental.  It was her being covered in [[User:MorbusIff|brown fluid]] that so shocked Ghyllian public opinion.  --[[User:Jcowan|John Cowan]] 14:31, 17 May 2005 (EDT)
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Another point: you use Daydream Believer like a proper name, but in [[Egron]] it appears to be the name of a role or category of people.  This can be salvaged by referring to ''the'' Daydream Believer, with emphasis.  --[[User:Jcowan|John Cowan]] 14:33, 17 May 2005 (EDT)

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I must object to the line about the Paramount Queen of -7 EC. In that article, she is clearly said to have been Xuriental. It was her being covered in brown fluid that so shocked Ghyllian public opinion. --John Cowan 14:31, 17 May 2005 (EDT)

Another point: you use Daydream Believer like a proper name, but in Egron it appears to be the name of a role or category of people. This can be salvaged by referring to the Daydream Believer, with emphasis. --John Cowan 14:33, 17 May 2005 (EDT)

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