Talk:Looliers

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(First draft: you've gotta correct your Citations.)
 
(Early copywriting/logistics concerns.)
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At most, you can only list three '''Citations''' in the footer of an entry - one existing (non-phantom) entry from a previous turn, and two phantoms (either undefined from turns in the past, or turns for the future) (refer to Rule 2 and second FAQ in [[Lexicon discussion]]). Please correct your '''Citations''' block to list only three (one of your phantom citations MUST be Ibaan Malmiz, since he's a new phantom you created in this entry). Ignoring that, another good entry from you, though I'll be reading it more closely in a few days. --[[User:MorbusIff|Morbus Iff]] 13:31, 2 Dec 2004 (EST)
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Alright, copyediting/logistic concerns:
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* [[Battle of Barnum Stones]] suggests the Looliers only ''camped'' in the Vale of Serdoch, not that they lived there.
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--[[User:MorbusIff|Morbus Iff]] 10:41, 9 Dec 2004 (EST)

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Alright, copyediting/logistic concerns:

--Morbus Iff 10:41, 9 Dec 2004 (EST)

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